- In a previous assignment, you wrote an introduction article in the “F” pattern. Based on what we discussed in class and based on the feedback provided in class, write a new introductory “content” incorporating “plain English writing for the web” in the “F” pattern including visuals. You are to include your “revised version” (if the version you submitted was not in the F-Pattern). Ensure that it addresses the three main objectives of plain English writing. As a reminder, this is an introductory post for your business. Ensure you list it in your hardcopy. (12 Marks)
Revised version:
Personalized Pet Tags – Welcome to The Furever Tag
At The Furever Tag, we understand your pet is part of the family. That’s why we create high quality, personalized pet identification tags to keep them safe and stylish.
Why your Pet Needs a Furever Tag
Made Just for Them: Choose from many unique shapes, fun colours and personalized engraving to match your dog’s personality.
Built to Last: We create each Furever Tag from premium materials to ensure the information on your tag stays clear and readable over time.
Lifetime Warranty: If a tag gets damaged, we’ll replace it for you!
Built for Pet Parents Who Care About Quality
If you value quality, safety and style, The Furever Tag is for you! Our tags keep your pet secure and add a touch of style.
How it works:
Pick Your Tag – Choose your favourite tag from the Original Paw ID Tag to the Silent ID Tag.
Customize It – Personalize your tag with your pet’s name, contact information and a fun message.
We’ll Handle the Rest – Your tag is crafted with care and shipped quickly.
Shop With Confidence
You can trust The Furever Tag to keep your pet safe and stylish wherever they go. Their well-being is our top priority, which is why every tag is designed with care. Our simple process makes shopping stress free, so your pet gets their tag quickly, and you can focus on what matters most.
Give your pet safety and style with a Furever Tag! Learn more at thefurevertag.com