1. Find one (1) headline that you came across recently and thought it was great. You are to explain why it resonated with you. Please ensure that you base your answers only topics discussed in class. Meaning, based on course content discussed in class, you are to tie specific elements that we discussed constituted a “good” headline or “elements” of a good headline and how this specific element is referenced in the headline that resonated with you. (6 Marks)
(33 BEST Things to do in BC, Canada (2025 Bucket List!)
https://destinationlesstravel.com/things-to-do-in-british-columbia/
This headline that I came across recently resonated with me since I have been actively seeking things to do in British Columbia as I will be going on vacation there come mid August. I have already planned this trip, meaning this headline is highly relevant to me. This headline immediately got my attention since it was already something I was interested in and guided me to click onto the article.
In class we learnt how to craft headlines, a step by step guide about why they matter and how if you don’t resonate some sort of power within the headline it wont work. One of the most important factors affecting good headlines are numbers, especially odd ones. Our brain can process numbers easier than the word “eleven” for example. In this article “33” was the number used, and this element resonated with me because there are so many things to do in British Columbia and narrowing it down to 33 is a good amount because even if I didn’t like some options I would still have plenty to choose from. To me it signalled that the article would be structured, scannable and easy to read without me having to try and find the information everywhere all over the article. There was an expectation that this article would be about 33 specific things to do in British Columbia which clearly enticed me to want to know more.
Headlines should also be concise, this one consisted of 54 characters. This is a standard that Google has that not only helps the reader but can also help in SEO. 60 characters or less is the ideal length from what we learnt in class. This headline was fully displayed in the search result and wasn’t cut off making it more intriguing to me because I wasn’t guessing what the rest of the headline could have said. I genuinely knew what I could expect from this headline. A good headline promises something valuable to the user and should serve a purpose while being easily digestible so that the reader can actually understand. This headline promised its value by using power words such as “BEST” adding a level of authority and excitement. Travellers are usually looking for top notch experiences so that they can make the most out of their trip. This appeal is to connect with customers emotionally and this resonated with me in terms of FOMO (fear of missing out). It would be devastating to me if I went on a once in a lifetime trip and missed so many opportunities so this really resonated with me because I’m an active person who seeks things to do to be fulfilled. Headlines should build a momentum, and convince the readers that this is something they should click on and read. This comes to show how much a well crafted and beneficial headline is worth.
Additionally, we learnt in class that the “4 U’s” are crucial to confident, attention driven headlines that actually make a difference. Its unique because creates a sense of exclusivity. Specifically the phrase “BEST Things to do” makes it feel curated instead of just generic and “2025 Bucket List” ensures that its fresh unlike other outdated travel articles that exist. This resonates with me because I have a “bucket list” that I keep on my phone with many travel milestones I have or want to complete. The fact that this is in the title makes it even more rewarding and in connection with what I stand for as a young traveler. Its also ultra specific giving detailed information to the user such as “33 BEST” and “Things to do in BC, Canada.” The exact number sets a specific expectation and the location specifies the location making its context relevant to travellers who are interested on planning a trip to BC or have already made the plans including myself.
Adding on, it creates a sense of urgency with the phrase “2025 Bucket List” since its stating that these are activities that should be participated in this year before it would be too late to do so. “BEST” also creates urgency since readers may feel inclined to take part in these top notch must do experiences before the opportunity leaves. I know that after seeing this, I want to take part in what the article has to offer to show my friends and family from back home. Why wouldn’t I want to if they are considered the “BEST” that British Columbia has? Lastly, this headline is useful. For readers inclined to want to know what to do, this headline provides a clear promised value of 33 experiences. “Bucket List” helps imply that all of these activities are must do’s and something useful that readers can take and incorporate into their own itinerary.
Overall, the headline effectively incorporates the use of the “4 U’s” making it a headline that is likely to be effective and providing something of value that the users can walk away with. This headline is a step ahead of competition since it touches on these four factors and many more making it not only great but also in resonance with me, an active experience seeker individual looking to make my trip ultimate. I think it resonated with me the most because I will be there visiting my aunt in August and it will be interesting to see how many things I can knock off of my bucket list. I have never been to British Columbia so it will be interesting to see everything with my own eyes and create my very own bucket list experiences.
Since I clicked on this headline, it clearly stood out to me due to its clear, engaging and relevant structure in touch with an upcoming vacation I will be taking. Being swayed by the headline means that it was effective.